2photo critiques

I love this picture overall. My only big thing is, was that it got really pixelated after i sent it from my phone to the computer. So i loved the color of the sky and the texture of the clouds, but you really cant see it in this picture. I thought i would be able to edit it to make it look the same, but it didnt happen. Its a good angle up picture.

ARTICLE REVIEW

When taking pictures of a animal, you dont want to get any of the background. You really just want to focus on the animal. It's the biggest challenge for wildlife photographers to focus the attention on the animals. One way to edit the picture is just to erase everything besides the animal. What doesnt add to the understanding of the animal should be cropped away. When you have a picture of an animal cropped only around its face the tight cropping draws the viewer's eye to the character and majesty of the animal. The main lighting should be soft yet bright. You should try to avoid distractions in the background. The best way to edit the animal is to up the brightness, and contrast, but really light areas should need to be toned down. dark areas, such as shadows can often turn slightly blue, so it needs to be balanced with the color onlthe main light falling on it.

Poem

i got bored so i put the picture and poem together.

I've tried so hard to explain

by my actions that he's like a brother.

but his feelings are so plain

as he acts as if my lover.

i've tried to help him understand,

but he refuses to believe

that im not in love and can't take his hand.

so one day, i'll leave.

I'll miss my friend immensely

and wish he could've understood.

I hope he'll forget quickly

sooner and faster than i would.

goodbye my best friend,

I'll love till the end.

as i grow to understand life less and less, i learn to love it more and more.

-Jules Renard-

Photo Critique& Edited Photo

Original.

When i look at this photo it actually makes me feel gloomy.

I feel that its too dark, and could really use some more light,

especially around the rainbow. The rock and sand i would definitaly

leave dark, but i would lighten the sky and the water. I think this is

a beautiful picture with the rainbow, it seems to me like its there to

make you happy. When i see a rainbow i always think something good

will happen after. So i think that it has a good essence, its just to gloomy

to make me happy. I love everything about this photo except the lighting.

edited.

Frame

focus:sharp

Distance; far

Formal Balance

Focus;Soft

Low Key

Far Distance

Silouette

Medium Distance

Horizontal

Angle Up

Angle Down

Texture

Rhythm

Close Distance

Angle Straight

Name

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12 Photos of rules

Focal Point; I chose this picture as focal point because the ring is the main focus and the rest of the photo is blurred.

Breaking The Rules; I chose this picture as breaking the rules because it didnt really fall under anything else. I dont really like this picture though just because the bright streak in th middle is really bright and it gets a little hard to read what the ring says.

Radial Symmetry; I chose this picture as radial symmetry because you can see the reflection of the pearls in the black table.

The Rule Of Thirds; I chose this picture as the rule of thirds because theres 3medals and its not really split into equal thirds but i placed all the medals in the top right corner so i could leave the whole bottom empty and the left corner empty as well.

Back, Mid, and Foreground; I chose this photo as back, mid, and foreground because i have 3medals in it, one in the front, one in the middle, and then one in the back. So i thought it fit in the rule very well.

Overlapping; I chose this photo as overlapping because the band of the front medal is

overlapping the medal in the back.

Arrangement; I chose this as arragement because there are 3medals next to eachother and you can see each of the shadows and its just a neat arrangement of the pictures. The first medal is spinning, the middle medal is turned to the side, and the last medal is slanted.

Triangulation; I chose this picture for Triangulation because this was one of the only photos that had some triangular angles in it.

Filling the Frame; I chose this picture as filling the frame because it really files up the frame, it is a small object, but the picture shows very good detail of the cannon, you can even see a cobweb on it if you look close enough.

Axial Symmetry; I chose this as axial symmtry, just because, its one way and then in a mirror its backwards.

Juxtaposition; I chose this picture as Juxaposition because its all in the left half of the photo, and its has a shadow thats just in a cool position.

Interesting Aethestic; I chose this picture as interesting aethestic, because i didnt know what else to put it under, it is in a mirror, and the background is blurred, and i just like the picture.